the story is actualy not too preachy]
and i will admit i did not really expect that the fighter piloet was comein here u might want to put an extra clue in the 1st ppart that its anothe rplanet the wieght sensor on the bed just gave me a scifi inkling i almost thought it was the future
maybeing brushing yellow fur before going to fly the plane
or did u want that to b ambougus like that twilight zone ware the woman is being atacked by liliputian sized aliens and at the end thares a nasa symbol on thier ship i guess thats the feel of the story twilight zone but slightly more political hows all that for constructive critisim

ps munch and fin r adorable but they dont really fit ;)